Oh, I like this very much! Such a lovely backstory you've created for Rosmerta that has the sense that it could just be canon--I'm guessing there'd be a lot more 'half-bloods' than purebloods, whatever the rest of Sirius's family hold to. I like the boys interest in Rosmerta's sister--of course a pretty girl would catch their eye, and if she was mischief into the bargain... ;)

Special permission my Fwooper! *spluttersnortsnigger* Like it!

The way you depict these two teenage boys is very well done--lots of 'show', and yet not overplayed; they feel real.

This line Rosmerta bit her bottom lip, her eyes tracing thoughts around her head. deserves special mention--how many times have I tried to think of a way to describe someone thinking--this is so spot on!

A real treat of a read! Thank you very much! :D